All Comments on 'The Beginning'

Good use of descriptive language

I note that this is your first submission as GenerallySexy, but I simply cannot believe that you are anything but a seasoned writer to bring us such high-quality work; your way with words makes you stand out like a beacon!

Welcome to Literotica, thank you for a wonderful first story, please write more for us and have five stars with all my good wishes.

...to read more.

You tease by giving only glimpses of a story, leaving me curious to know more.

An excellent start.