All Comments on 'The Bet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot

Very hot. This story got me hard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nicely done!

Artsy in its directness, all with inner thoughts expressed in a way that doesn't get in the way, with no wasted words.

Great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Straight to the Bone

The writing is hard and hot, straight and direct. The effect is a shock to the erotic system. One of the best.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 13 years ago
Very

beautiful.

Thank you.

ptebadenptebadenalmost 8 years ago
When does it start?

I'm waiting for the hunting

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