All Comments on 'The Bet'

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catphan8catphan8about 11 years ago
Confusion

I was confused the whole time in this story. I couldn't tell who was married to who. I'm also not sure who was narrating the story and if the narrator changed at some point. It was very confusing or maybe it was just me! I dunno!?!?

bobby9909bobby9909about 11 years ago
Just read your disclaimer:

If you write a story about swingers and swapping, why post a disclaimer and put it in Loving Wives? Why not put it in Group Sex where it belongs?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
only one real problem with this story

...and that's that one of the characters is using an iPhone in the beginning. They should get an Android phone instead. iPhones are on the way out now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Epic stupidity!

The guys are jacking off in their showers and nailing some other honeys on the side. Are these women really THAT clueless? Laughably bad.

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