All Comments on 'The Bet'

Would a wife who wants to stay married abuse her husband? Embarrass, tease, but not abuse. You will have to be a very good writer to save this marriage.

First off - his answer to her abuse was "no". Had she pressed the point, he would have thrown her out or moved out. Better yet, simply drag his battered and bruised ass down to the hospital, have them document the damage go to the Police and have the bitch removed from the house to jail, Then divorce her. This was stupid, violent and disgusting behavior from a woman that obviously had no love or respect for her husband and wanted a divorce. What was erotic, sexy or interesting about this crap?

No stars as even giving this one star would be an insult to the star.

This was a pretty intense beginning to a series. Although it was the result of loosing a bet (of which submitting as a slave for the next month was the prize) it does border on spousal abuse. None the less hubby has forcefully agreed to "do anything" to please his wife over the next month. To start out with a severe wooden hairbrush spanking followed with consuming piss and residual shit made for a rough start to a month of servitude. Without a doubt their relationship is going to be quite different going forward.

Oral services (including eating creampies) are an expected part of this type of relationship along anal play. She could also incorporate prostate milking, chastity, edging and orgasm denial too. Keeping in mind there should be some type of intense orgasmic relief for the sub occasionally for his peace of mind and sense of her love towards him. I'm looking forward to reading the following pages as the month continues. :-) 5 of 5 stars

From the title and the lead in, an intelligent person could tell where this story was heading. Hell, one anonymous comment even started laying out where it should go from here. And yet there are still those morons who continue to read the entire story just so they can tell you it's not good, or why this husband should divorce this wife....as if it's real life or it's impossible that there could be anyone with a different mind set than their limited bible thumping brains can comprehend. WHY even start reading it??? Why finish reading it??? The answer is pretty simple.... Nothing erotic in the Bible and no one has to know they visit this site when they stay anonymous. As far as the story goes, was it harsh??....sure. Will it get more extreme???.... I'd guess yes again (if it continues). I would suggest using punctuation to make it more easily read. Maybe adding a more specific warning so people who aren't very bright can not waste their time..... Even though they will still read something they absolutely despise just to "try to help people out if the devil's grip" .....lol

3 stars to start.

How many times have we made a bet that we know we can't pay? I'll bet you a million dollars, shake hands and then lose. Goes along with "I'll do anything". At some point you just bite the bullet and just say no. So what? This guy is an utter moron to go through with this. But then there would be no story and the former happy couple could have their bitter divorce posted instead. Your honor, "He made a bet and backed out of it". "Oh yeah, sorry I abused him so much, that is no reason to give him 75% of all our assets. And I have to spend 5 years in prison. He made a bet". "I won". No bitch, you lose!!!! Sorry, no vote this time. Will wait until you're finished with the story.

Sorry, but not my cup of tea. I’m here for erotica and this wasn’t erotic, just gross. Read if you like gross bathroom action, but move on if you don’t.