All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 01'

... awfully short. You should have developed the story better. Are her 'subbies' male, female or both? Are his subs male, female or both? I'm sure that you'll tell what the bet was later. Keep writing.

I loved this and can't wait for the next part. I love the idea of a Domme being dominated and have explored it in a couple of my stories as well and I think if you get the next part right this could be a must read. Good luck!

I want to see a Domme get something she isn't prepared for. lol