All Comments on 'The Big, The Black, The Beautiful'

by sydian

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BrettLynnBrettLynnover 15 years ago
Top notch stuff...

I wonder if there's a part 2...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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you...use...too...many...ellipses...and...hyphens...it...distracts...the...reader...

JubilationJubilationover 12 years ago
wtf?

i didnt even read the story, what...is wrong with your writing style? you keep skipping words and putting ... in random places, its a headache

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