All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift'

This had to be one of the worst stories I've ever read.

@babyjane12084 I agree with you. It's not my best one. I've just started writing and it's my first experience as a writer. English is not my first language but I'm learning. Please feel free to give your input on how I can improve. Thank you

Constructive criticism is good. Random insults without any attached advice, phrased in a rude way, is just the calling card of a rude person.

Ignore them. Keep writing. It'll come.

@LucyPoundson

Thank you for your encouraging words, it means a lot to me

Don't jerk it while you wrote.

This is so ridiculously rushed, its laughable.

Thank you for the advice. I got the same feedback from another person and will keep that in mind in the future. I have been careful in my other stories so far and haven't repeated the mistake.

@all

I have edited this story with the help of some feedback I got from readers. I have submitted the edited version and it will be published after 48 hours.

@ all

The edited version is now available for reading. It's better than the previous one and I hope you guys like it. Do let me know what you think.