All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift Ch. 02'

Not faultless. Could do with some proof reading. Starting to get into the dom and sub thing as erotic material, Storyline intriguing and stimulating. Enjoyed the descriptions and the fanatsies. Must confess that she-males are a real turn on and big desire. Thanks enjoyed the read

This chapter was just as good as the original, which I mean that they were both AMAZING!!! Loved how they had become a couple and that she was very sweet and loving, but also controlling when she wanted him. SOOOO HOTTTT!!!

Would love to read more about these two in another chapter!!! PLEASE!!!!

I don't know. I didn't like this one as much as part one. The poor girl Nikki wasn't treated so well. I liked the loving sentiment at the end. While the love play is abusive they certainly seem to have a loving relationship. Keep writing, Dear. You definately have a great imagination!

I love the idea of having one in my mouth and one in my ass it would be a dream cum true.

Plz do another chapter but i have an idea. Why dont you do another story with just nikki and her life. maybe she gets a boyfriend too. i liked nikki, she seemed cool. More chapters plz. love the story

Better than part 1, but wanted the story about him stealing Alexis from Lori.