by stpf2002
Yes, a good story, but why didn't you give it to someone to proof read.
Dear @ melsdad
First of all, thank you for your comments, truly appreciated xxx
As mentioned, I am not a writer at all and simply trying to relate here some of my real life experiences with a touch of fantasy. As I am also sort of new in posting here, I was/am not aware we can submit our stories for proof reading, especially that English is not my first language, but... Greek is :)
If you would guide me for my next posts or even provide me with some advise, that would be truly appreciated!
Kisses,
Sophia