All Comments on 'The Blackmail House'

This needs editing in a big way and many words with letters missing. There are sentences with complete words missing.

A fanny is an ass, not a pussy.

Gross, kid with bizarre fetish who doesnt know the meaning of words.

Someone toss the underage wanker.

illiterate shit.

Needs an editor but it’s not a bad start. I would like you anonymous commenters to do better or grow a pair and reveal yourself...very brave to tear down others when all you do is troll this site.

Which is why British tourists are always amused by the term "Fanny Pack".

https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Fanny

What are the girls' ages? Are any married or with live-in BF's, and if so, how do they explain their visits? Don't any of them want to stop this?

The story concept was good but the writing was stiff, almost like reading instructions or a recipe. Next time you should just read your story instead of proof reading it. I'm saying not to proof read, just relax and read it like someone else s story.

I started this so I'll finish, but I just read your newest post and it is much better. Good work.

A great scenario, but your writing style is very staid and academic, this story has been raced to a closure but needs at least another chapter to finish it off properly.

Patton_McGroin, a fanny in the UK is the vulva and vagina, it is the colonial from across the pond that call the derriere a fanny, this writer is writing in English not American.