by drunkwife
Just the right length and buildup for such an intense encounter.
You capture the act of a party hookup wonderfully and inject things with just the right amount of energy. This is a well executed short story. Well done!
Very nice...we "silverfoxes" really appreciate these types of stories!
I would be on the watch for you in my neighbourhood, sexy. Come on over for a glass of wine anytime. Mmmm.
This is the best story I ever read. It's just the right length and pace to keep me spellbound from beginning to end. I hope you'll always be this interesting.
Sara - what a story, love your fantasy's. You have a very vivid way of writing and providing the reader with enough of the fantasy to make it very Hot. Nice!! Richard
You have a wonderful imagination...or incredible sex life. Love it either way. xo