by WesternMovieFan
Got me hot.
good storyline slow and positivly heating up
I can't wait to read the next episode!
Very nice! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
Barbara sounds like a dowdy loser. And the dress too.
Your writing is good. Looking forward to where you go with these two people in love.
got me hard. now make me cum.
Really enjoyed this. Very erotic to have the characters so well described and their mutual nervousness of what is happening.