by WesternMovieFan
Really enjoyed this. Very erotic to have the characters so well described and their mutual nervousness of what is happening.
got me hard. now make me cum.
Your writing is good. Looking forward to where you go with these two people in love.
Barbara sounds like a dowdy loser. And the dress too.
Very nice! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
I can't wait to read the next episode!
good storyline slow and positivly heating up
Got me hot.