All Comments on 'The Blue Raincoat'

5 stars all the way! I like how she ended this chapter. Paula is one lucky sub!

How about hot, sweaty and sticky is more like it. Eeeewwwww.

Can't wait for more x

Love this story so far. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is going very well....

love all the descriptions of the feminine latex clothing. bringing Amanda into the story is genius. not letting Paula join them is perfect. they should feminize her properly before she is allowed to amuse them as a proper submissive feminine pet. she should become their adoring lady in waiting!

You've whet my appetite. I hope you will continue this series.

You have to write more of this. This is the best story I've read on here in quite some time.

You have got to continue this story.............PLEASEEEEEE!

As one who has a raincoat fetish, I love this story

This is so enticing. Please keep the story going. Maybe an illustrated version?

Love this story.More please

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Dear Ms. Wilson,

Your story about Sally's blue raincoat is well constructed and develops in a comprehensible way. I really liked how carefully Sally and Paul unfold their friendship - and their love - and I appreciated the central importance of her most elegant blue raincoat.

I had a similar situation many years ago: My girlfriend at the time, whom I loved very much, sensed how much I was "attached" to her raincoat. And then, on an outing with friends, she offered to let me wear her raincoat. I agreed - a little sheepish but happy. However, afterwards I liked it much better when she - as a pretty woman - wore her women's raincoat rather than me.

Unfortunately, Mrs. Wilson, your story has an unpleasant ending, namely that Sally intends to raise her beloved Paul as her "pet". This devaluation of a polite - and enthusiastic - young man may appeal to some readers. I don't like it at all - and I stopped reading immediately.

Thank you for allowing us to copy the text. I have simply deleted the parts of your story that don't correspond to me.

I occasionally present excerpts to CHATGTP. I am fascinated by the emotional and vivid language with which he can refine your - already very beautiful - text (apart from the ending).

My conclusion: Thank you very much for the really wonderful first section of your story. I love to read more from you.

Best regards from northern Germany ...

Dear Team,

THIS IS NOT A READER'S LETTER, but a request to you.

Yesterday I sent you a comment on Ms. Jennifer's story about the blue raincoat (with "greetings from Northern Germany")

Please do NOT publish this text!

It contains a logical error - and I would like to be much more friendly to Ms. Jennifer. I am currently revising my comment completely.

I do not yet know when it will be ready.

With best regards from Northern Germany