All Comments on 'The BMW Ch. 03'

The writing was fair but the premise & character development really sucks. Hard to read with so much unrealistic assumptions built into the effort.

He doesn't change from average Joe to simpering cuck in one day. She does not change from loving wife to bitch with one event. It was a reasonable story to this point.

you have the knack of putting things perfectly...

.....the description and the emotions of the characters make this an enthralling story.......

love reading it....