All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love this second chapter

Scott, I m so happy with this second installment of the bookstore story.

After reading the first story was so wondering about the ring, would they meet again.

And you so for filled all my questions.

The story line, how they did feel, what they where thinking, I so wanted to go fast and read the end but did not.

You portrayed them so well, just could feel how they felt.

And yes it was a surprise that the ring was her grand mothers.

But than there passion, how they want it to take slow but could not.

That was so amazing to read, i could feel there passion.

This second chapter was just heaven to read it, and again so wishing I was Sara without an H.

Not to mention can't wait to read the next chapter, where its going.

Scot your a great writer can't wait to read more of your stories.

Emm

curvegirlcurvegirlover 13 years ago
Wonderful!

Scot I'm so glad your Bookstore stories got published! I love the characters and the tension between them. Both chapters were a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing them!!

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