All Comments on 'The Boss's Son'

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randy2somerandy2somealmost 7 years ago
Confusing name change

Story got confusing when the son's name started changing from Marco to Marcus

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You're not your

Grammar is important.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Blah blah blahblah..

Everything is cool and interesting until it comes to the concrete - and turns out to be a horny teenager-theorist.

And in these kid theoreticians, certain things are constantly, unchangeable and obligatory - and they repeat in different combinations and combinations.

And so .. COMPULSORILY and ALWAYS, "sex" starts with "sucking a cock". - Pussy is to be shaved and smooth, big tits.. and of a biiig and huge dick!!

- Is repeated monotonously such a scheme in these children, to boredom!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

average story

too rushed

tanya was a women in pain and despair and corcerd into being a whore for him and his clients

like any other non con female heroine she started with tears into forced submission of her body

whats stupid about this whole story is that she suddenly became a shameless whore while giving her a bj despite that she know he was mocking/smiling at her downfall and then begged to him to fuck her

i am really sorry but any unwilling woman who is forced to prostitution will not enjoy sex no matter how many forced orgasm are thrown at her

also why was marco behaving like a lover or why the need of romantic sex when all he wants to do is humiliate her and pimp her

and also other woman with similar problems

he wants a harem of such a women

so whats all with romantic seduction and setting at first and then plain degradation and humiliation

it doesnt blend well especially in noncon

it might have worked better if the seduction had progressed to degradation and sexslavery harem after betrayal and blackmail in more than 1 chapters

her 180 degree transformation in just one chapter isnt practical and erotic enough

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