All Comments on 'The Box'

Honestly, this story scared me. I'm not one to criticize someone's kink, so I'll leave it at that.

Even if you despise what is going on, your writing is like a fly caught in a spider web...there is no escape!! Although I wouldn't write a story like this in a million years, I respect your courageousness in tackling a very difficult/taboo topic!

and you have gone 10 years in a marriage D/S role and you trust someone who breaks their word like this? A little too much trust has been given to a master who does not deserve it.

This is a story, plain and simple. It would appear people confuse stories with real life.

I can't believe a woman wrote this cruel story.

I'm sorry if you think a woman can't write a story like this, then you are mistaken.

Get off your high horse and next time email me direct or leave your name so I can comment directly to you.

Dear Suba

I found your story extremely erotic. Fictional writing is the place where boundaries can be crossed - the idea that we are completely powerless and at the whim of our dominant partner is surely what fantasy is all about. Clearly, real life requires more input and control from the sub.

Not even remotely sexy.

Your kink's ok and all but ... ew.

I really like how you contextualize your characters. They very clearly exist in a world and have history. That can be hard to find in erotica. This story did it for me. =) I loved the level of control the Master had.

You know you are doing it right when even the people who don't like this kink feel compelled to read to the end and leave a comment.

Yuck