All Comments on 'The Box In The Attic'

The story started out great, and lasted all the way through the cousins' shower. But by the end, when the rest of the family got involved, it felt rushed. Very little description of the sex and various encounters, it felt like a very descriptive story suddenly had to be finished as quickly as possible. The worst part is, the entire beginning (including the shower) seemed to be building up to these bigger events, and then they were only glossed over. Would love to see this story expanded to describe the climax sessions in more (or even some) detail.

This story is an excellent foundation for a series of "family stories". The writing is very good.

I had hopes to read about her father, mother and brother having sex and all of the glorious details of what happened.How she felt after she had a entire day of getting overwhelmed with the tremendous amount of sex she had.

a fantastic story awesome very exciting and so very erotic

now for the next part or parts

What percentage of families do you suppose have sexual secrets buried in boxes in closets, basements, or attics? Probably more than you'd expect.

This story just gave us a hint of what might be hidden there. Thanks for posting.

I liked it came from left field... sorely wished I had grown up in a similar family.....to bad...

that was a very pleasant story beautifully told