All Comments on 'The Boy Next Door'

Great story carry on and lets have some more.

we can't wait! Thanks for posting.

Damn where do all these idiots attend school. The author failed grade school grammar. All the "word -- word," and "..." used proves the point. Improperly done as to grammar and standard style for any basic grade school class.

Thank you.

Personally, I'm fine with criticism of authors who can't spell for shit or who use virtually no punctuation at all, but picking on the use of "-" to denote asides and "..." to denote extented pauses - devices that are in common usage these days - seems petty. Some may claim it is an example of language evolution. After all, these authors aren't submitting their work for Booker Prize consideration.

This is cheating.

Why would anyone post a story like this in Romance?

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Superb! Love the story!

Don't let those assholes who criticize stories without leaving their names! They are just would be authors! Same for guy who doesn't like cheating wives, Duh! This website is called Lit"erotica" for a reason. Maybe they should be reading fairy stories instead!! I liked how you didn't rush the story and maybe let the sex scene go a little bit longer! Keep up the good work!

But I don't believe it belongs in the romance category, at least not without continuing perhaps it is better suited to a different category if this is the end of the tale. Romance should have more then animal attraction leading to steamy sex, in my opinion.

Real good story if the naysayers don't care for it Screw'em all,but for future reference,it's a TRIKE (3 wheels) not a BIKE (2 wheels),I know,I owned a bike and now own a trike !!!

Love this story, and hope you write a sequel to it! Want to know if anything goes on between these two!

but not even close to a Romance

One of the best pieces I've read here. A wonderfully crafted story about real people rather than an industrial training manual describing pistons and gears. Bravo. Brava. Which ever you are (I suspect the latter).

Not even close. Try loving wives or erotic couplings.

a cheating slut makes it a Loving wives story. hope the whore gets caught and thrown to the curb...

Google what a pap smear is... 🙄

Odd ending.