All Comments on 'The Breast Machine Ch. 06'

I've missed you!

thanks for welcoming me back, had a bad year, but lots of new stories nearly ready, and continuing with existing series, Gary

Welcome back Story Teller.

I for one am excited you have returned. I am sorry you had a bad year but I do hope this year will be a better one. I look forward to the continuation of this story and other awesome stories you create.

Great writers are often forgiven if their work is still good and their efforts are to please.

Please continue to post your work and don't leave us for so long again.

YOU CAME BACK!!. i thought all the best authors had just up and left thank you for coming back!!!!!

I LOVE that you're back... but I gotta say, this chapter is a bit of a step down. (Notice it's currently the only entry with a rating under 4.4.)

You kinda killed the fantasy here.

the story line can be saved don't fret about what others say about your rating's or reviews opinions are like buttholes everyone has one. I have read all 6 and I must say very impressive now the wondering question is nagging at my mind is will he ever get back with Jane? And the love they shared for each other but please write on I'll be looking for the next one soon I hope.

I have to agree. Great story line. Lot's of possibilities here. I'd love to hear more.