All Comments on 'The Cabin'

This is about a woman risking her life (nor knowing the strangers, she didn't know what kind of diseases they could have...), her marriage, the respect of her children, just for dirty frills with unknown men...Was it worth to risk all that? I think this woman needs urgent psychiatric treatment...1*

The story is written from the woman's point of view. That she is married is practically irrelevant to the plot .. she could be anyone. In fact, the only role that the husband plays is as an excuse for feeling guilty.

Why is all this ambiguous? Because it does not read as though it is a story about a woman and her thoughts and motivations, even though it is from her point of view. The story reads as though it is the husband's fantasy, thought by him, imagining what he would like his wife to do .. for whatever mysterious reason motivates him.

As a fantasy, why not? People have weirder fantasies than this. But whose fantasy is it?

No dialogs? Why?

In real life they find her dead body 4 weeks after she went missing.

Keep putting your husband in danger with stds and strange men who jerk off in cabins. So this is your fantasy? Stinking cocks ? Wow. You must really be a piece of work. I

Sweetie is mindlessly obsessed. The story is totally narrated ... usually the characters tell much of a story by talking to each other ... but Sweetie is too conflicted to talk.

Finally, this is not really LW. Hubby's ONLY role is to be a nameless, faceless, mute entity Sweetie sometimes feels feels guilty for cheating on. The story would be exactly the same (except for troll-reader reactions) if she were presented as an unmarried woman!

I enjoyed your story. It followed along with the category in which it was placed. The descriptions were appropriate to the matter at hand, and I enjoy a wife going her own way story.

I expected more details following the statement of this being a long story. Are you planning on continuing?

Haters will always be haters and must be overlooked. Their motivation for taking shots as they sit in the peanut gallery are their own. Keep moving forward.

It's not just this story. There are so many LW stories from the husband's POV that are equally ambiguous, that are told as dispassionately as if they were told by an unknown 3rd party narrator. To steal a Gertrude Stein quote, "There is no there there,"

I don't know why it was written

or why I read it.

a waste of band width

I thought interesting about how the obsession takes control. Is the author a male trying to discover the woman's point of view? I would rather it was told by a woman. But the good writing and the great detail made it an interesting read. Yes there are such people where the husband and wife go "dogging..." This could continue with her getting hubby to approve and accompany her maybe.

Why do you idiots read these stories if you're just going to make these kinds of stupid And judgmental comments? Here's a tip: It's fantasy. Also, people have been fucking strangers for a long time. A really long time.

Maybe making hateful comments is how you resolve your conflicted feelings after jacking off to the story. That's not healthy.

I hope you do a part II where she really lets loose.

let them saywhat they like! Her story turned me on! That is why I read it. It reminds me of ME. I never chanced it in a deserted cabin. I wouuld if my husband was there to enjoy it all with me. If this lady wanted a partner here I am!

This is a great story I liked it a lot. Please write more !

Fantastic story. Great narration, and so hot. Here's to hoping you do another chapter.

stupid. Uninteresting, not erotic, and pitiful narration. Go back to Dick and Jane.

I thought this was complete and utter crap. Your character, a slut? Oh please. I've read erotica about far sluttier girls then her. If this was printed, I wouldn't use it to wipe my ass!

Anyone who has ever known the joys of sex in the great outdoors and where you might get caught will love this.

If my wife were more adventurous, i would rent a cabin for a week every summer.

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