All Comments on 'The Cage'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cute

Just like the girl next door. Well written and very tongue-in-cheek. More.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow! Great stuff

Two great stories today! That must be some kind of record. Three if you count the one DFWBeast dropped over in non-erotic. Very funny and those cracks the husband kept getting off. ROGLMAO! Keep writing, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not what I was expecting at all.

I saw the title, read the tags and saw cuckold and cheating and thought, nah. Then I saw the humor tag and thought, why not. What a neat little gem of a story! Just good humored fun. Perfect. It wasn't a saga of deceit and romance, but it was perfect for what it was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Talk about laugh out loud!

That was hilarious. That line about not getting the lips right!! I tried not to wake my wife up laughing. Nothing heavy or emotional, but you didn't intend for us to take it seriously. Very good. Top marks.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmover 7 years ago
Oh my

I loved this one. Almost passed on it glad I didn't. The humor was awesome. Nice job, Keep writing please. Just like this one make it funny and burn her still.

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