All Comments on 'The Camera Clicked'

You continue it and I'll be reading.

can't for you to put out some more parts

When is he going to fuck her? He should have went down on her while she was masturbating in the back yard. That was just plain cruel, not to suck her off, and lick her clit to make her orgasm stronger. Why doesn't he take some of that hate and turn it into love for his mother, and maybe he could get more from her than he is forcing her to do now. Rather than being mean to her why not pick her up and cuddle her and love her, she would respond to that more like a woman rather than a bitch.

Have you uploaded this before? It was very familiar.

Great story can't wait for more.

Love the way you are developing the relationship. Please don't bring anyone else into the story unless it's a aunt. Can't wait to read more.

glad you didn't rush it TOO much. a few technical errors, used "he" instead of "her",minor stuff like that. try re-reading your story out loud - but really READ IT.say each word. you know what you MEANT to write, but is that what appears on the screen?

It made me stiff it was good but you should make a sqecond part where the son gets intamit lol im bad at spelling

beyond amazing, best incest story ive ever read