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As she came to her senses she heard the clicks and shutters of John's camera. She didn't care, she was euphoric, returning from the clouds. She lay here with her eyes shut, head turned to the side. Closing her legs and bending them to bring them closer, she folded her arms and ran fingers over her skin. John decided the first phase was over.
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Anonymousover 11 years agoIt made me stiff it was good but you should make a sqecond part where the son gets intamit lol im bad at spelling
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoglad you didn't rush it TOO much. a few technical errors, used "he" instead of "her",minor stuff like that. try re-reading your story out loud - but really READ IT.say each word. you know what you MEANT to write, but is that what appears on the screen?
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoLove the way you are developing the relationship. Please don't bring anyone else into the story unless it's a aunt. Can't wait to read more.
