by IntrospectiveWanderer
Very good characterization. Very enticing and believable. The writer has good perception of human nature.
It woud be nice if Nancy could get close to both Carol and to Vanessa and thus open up more fully.
Of course it's just more of the same half a year after you submitted the four-part story of the Club, but when I had a good dish once, I love to find the same thing being served again seven months later when I sit at the dinner table. As long as the cook uses fresh ingrediënts each time. In this case he did.
Still love the lay back atmosphere, the always friendly people at the Club, their open-mindedness and sexyness, the natural surroundings, and the sex.
Thanks again.