All Comments on 'The Captain Chooses Rachel'

Not a bad story but why threaten to take her in every hole in front of everyone to make an example out of her and stop after coming in her mouth?

Loved your story, I hope it is only the begining.

Where's the rest of the story, why stop in the middle?

great story would love to see more chapters to it.

MORE PLEASE!

Please keep writing. And throw the mothers overboard of they become a nuisance.

Story line doesn't need them anyway.

please please please keep adding to this wonderful story!!!! you started out great keep it going!!

Make a part 2

I loved your story. It sort of reminded me of romance novels. Keep writing, I would love to read your work.

Please continue! This is a great beginning to what could be an awesome series!

Would have liked to see that spanking he promised, though...