All Comments on 'The Captain Chooses Rachel'

Would have liked to see that spanking he promised, though...

Please continue! This is a great beginning to what could be an awesome series!

I loved your story. It sort of reminded me of romance novels. Keep writing, I would love to read your work.

Make a part 2

please please please keep adding to this wonderful story!!!! you started out great keep it going!!

Please keep writing. And throw the mothers overboard of they become a nuisance.

Story line doesn't need them anyway.

MORE PLEASE!

great story would love to see more chapters to it.

Where's the rest of the story, why stop in the middle?

Loved your story, I hope it is only the begining.

Not a bad story but why threaten to take her in every hole in front of everyone to make an example out of her and stop after coming in her mouth?