by Rebeccasm
Like it very much........
Speechless, just waiting for the next.........
Don't make us wait more
Renee looks great with her new hairstyle. The artwork was great as usual. Loved having her home again and am waiting for more to unfold in her drama, Keep up the good work.
... but some plot suffers from some hiccups. Some humil. scenes are creative and appealing - but many others are just outright nasty (i.e. mud & bathroom tasks). Is the Ch5 plot line really erotic and plausible?
There might be an audience for all kinds of kinks but am wondering if this is for me
Great story and love the pictures, especially Dr Chen's enema machine! Just hope you dont get too crazy with sending her back for "more modifications " . Will Betty get to come back and play ? And please let them cum once in a while. ;) ....maybe the men come by and fuck her while strung up in the hall?
Best to do is make both women lick cunts and assholes in front of the workers and to have their Mistress correct errors with a merciless crop.
its a good story, but I think the Butler found out to quickly. If the wives had gone to a professional Dom, first who then obviously starts to push their limits and then realised who they were "doming" and tried to take advantage resulting in a battle of wills with the Husbands...there would have been more opportunities/depth to the story
Nice story but I m not dreaming or fantasinzing after reading Ch 05. The writer forgot that literotica is about fantasy, fetish and other similar things. Here he just demonstrate how unlimited power the masters have and how they can be merciless to destroy the girls. Their only motivation is that they can it without any remorse and get away with it without any trouble or worry. Any reasonable person would be wondering if such story is not written by some sick mind persons because after reading it, I realize that ther is no real story or a goal the writer is trynig to reach. In fact it is just about showing how mean and cruel the men are and how they can express such cruelty for no reason nor any explanation for such cruelity on those poor women who have let's say a libido just alittle bit above the average person. And they get punished and destroyed for having such a libido. It is more appropriate to locate the story in mosleim and arabic country. In that case, the idea and the story make senses !
Very good BDSM story. Don't need to locate in an arabic country like the previous comment proposed. Why ? It's all fine in ours !! We can't wait for the rest of the story. More humiliation and exhibition with Warren's employees and perhaps workers, like ass licking.
And where is Betty ?
Don't end it there. Everything about it is superb. Nice one.
These are all fine physical disciplines. I thought it would be appropriate for her husband or is it former husband to have another real woman at his side as Rene goes about her duties.
Been over 3 months between chapters, is there another on it's way or too busy elsewhere ?
The pics are really great but the storyline is lacking. I enjoy bondage and submission but this hasn't felt erotic in a while - even for me and I'm ALWAYS horny.
It started out great and got steadily worse. Not the worse I have read but definitely up there. It was too much to have her clean the shoes and the toilets by her tongue. I was so close to getting off until I read those words, when I did I lost all sexual appetite and was not able to cum. Disappointing to say in the least.
When will the next story be made! The high have fallen so low! Very well written!
I kept waiting for one of the two women to snap, and start attacking people. this was stupid. I went back and reread the other 4 installments, and they were all as bad if not worse. Would have been a good set to have someone in the military, or ex-military to blow some people away.
I haven't commented before so here are the accumulation of my thoughts and feelings on this amazing story.
I love the pictures and how unique and original this story is. I love how the rich wife is being used by her own former maids and butlers.
However I think I would've liked a little more time spent on the taboo relationship between betty and rene before they got caught and even some more time on rene's personal self-bondage adventures too before she got caught by Rene. Heck I wouldn't have minded if it the whole story was just either about Rene's self bondage adventures or her time spent with Betty.
I think the overall direction that you are choosing to go with is very creative and its reaching new peaks of humiliation for both of them though.
But I do wish there wasn't any licking toilets clean or drinking piss.
Nonetheless, I cannot wait for the next entry in this amazing series with great writing and great art.
Thank you for sharing this.
i dont care wut others say. this wuz awesome. i cummed before the nasty stuf
I think the ladies should be auctioned as a pair after their training, maybe a very strict dungeon master will purchase them.
The combination of the story and illustrations are great. Please don’t make us wait much longer for the continuation.
What happened, taking too long time to post, please give us the next chapter soon........
First of the series I found. Too over the top for me to even finish the first page. Sick to my stomach, thanks for nothing.
This Started as a decent story but has deteriorated into sadistic silliness. Wonder Woman or Super Girl would have trouble coping with what Rene and Betty have been put through.
Sorry not believable even for fantasy.