All Comments on 'The Challenge Ch. 01'

So sexy! To anonymous, she agreed to this. She has a safe word, set her limits and is getting immense pleasure. As a submissive, I find this hot. Please hurry with part 2!

A bit more detail and a bit more drawn out scenes needed. Interesting start.

I found it sexy,upbeat and fun. What could round 2 hold ? Hope to find out

Mixed feelings. It was mostly fun. You did an excellent job at telling the back story, ensuring it is consensual and so far showing his care of her. Yet I'm worried. Stories with escalation as a fundamental element so often race off into the absurd. I can't rate it until it all unfolds.

Such a well written story.

Wow, great start!