All Comments on 'The Change in Melissa Ch. 04'

Suggest science fiction.

That explains everything.

Hey kids guess what Moms a slut and has a genetic disease that makes her cheat on your dad. Aren't you going to wish your mom a Happy Mothers Day. Just an excuse for infidelity Previous comment is right Science Fiction

a slut mom story on mother's day, how sweet!

Pure trash. And, on Mom's Day? So, will add disgusting author.

another loser with an I. Q. of ten who wants to write their crap.

.45 cal pistol bullet applyed once to the back of said sluts head. and for maximum effectivneness her paramore must have 1 in the same area at the same time. cure for the common slut.

Very imaginative storyline, I can see this one going on forever! I'm not entirely convinced that Melissa actually wants to be 'cured' - she certainly enjoys the treatment!

You are really growing as a story teller and a writer. Each of your submissions gets better and it is obvious you are getting much more comfortable with your characters and your story line. Please continue. You have a wonderful ability.

Science has found the reason why men and women cheat on thier husbands and wives? That is interesting.

I stopped at the 11-inch cock. Anything after that was bound to be dreck. Get real.

—Girl who'd like to feel cocks that can slide in her moist cunt, not crush its nerve endings. You can always throw in a gigantic (and unbelievable) cock to make people think you're really a swinger. But this is old, old, old.

Suzzie in Seattle

Hi Suzzie,

Thanks for the feedback. The truth is that I did not measure anything so it was some editorial freedom. The man in this chapter was bigger than my husband (whom I have measured and is about 7 inches). I liked the number. I do disagree that big and really big hurt. I have only been with a few men "large" and they were very experience so it didn't hurt. It was very nice and exciting.

Thanks for reading. - Melissa

Still finding your story arousing. I had to fight through the 'science' of it a bit, but it is a story and the conclusion was very pleasing! What male does not enjoy girl on girl and then the opportunity to imagine joping them. Where are the married women with this gene in my city? :) :) thanks for keeping me entertained.

love your writing and your blogs

thanks Rod

A genetic trait for being a cheating whore. That's definitely a new one.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha!