All Comments on 'The Change Pt. 03'

More please!

Part 4 is pending, and Part 5 is all but written in my head. I have some time before I'll be able to get it jotted down tho.

And yes, Part 5 will be the anal stuff that the commenters in the earlier parts were asking for. I wanted a slow build to it. ;D

Will you do anything about the other people hit by this biological "weapon"? Might be fun to introduce Lita and Jerry to another couple experiencing the change.

I've thought about introducing other victims into the mix, but I'm trying to justify why Jerry and Lita would cheat on each other. As perverse as the story has been, in my eyes, the couple is still faithful and pure. I am trying to come up with something that makes it "okay" for them, but right now, the two of them have been giving in to urges with things, and I don't think that's a very good reason to be unfaithful. I have some ideas brewing though.