All Comments on 'The Change Pt. 08'

Grammatical errors made this a difficult read.

i have been waiting for ages to read more. thank you for this , now i'm going to be greedy - please more soon. thank you ( damn i wish so bad i could have this in real life !! ).

Thank you for continuing! I check back regularly! Please don’t wait so long for the next chapter!

Amazing story, love how extreme and yet tame it is. Really enjoying your writing and pacing for this one, can't wait to read more chapters.

Is this story abandoned?

I hope not. Please consider continuing.

I still check back regularly.

pleaso go on writing this story