by Sarahcheer
You seem to really like the ponygirl theme. As I had suggested in one of your other stories you should try and develop a more elaborate storyline with more detail. The one other thing I picked out was that you mae the girls unable to feel any sexual pleasure. Since this is your story I figure you have your reasons for this, yet I would have liked to have the girls able to experience pleasure. This way when they are mounted you could write about how they slowly but surely begin to enjoy the sex and ultimately give into their cators. Many times bondage is not only about a physical conversion but a mental one as well. Without the ability to become excited I fugure that none of the girls will ever enjoy being mounted. Still a good story.
I liked your next story about pony girls. I like the way you build a simple plot. Again well done and keep them coming!
I liked your next story about pony girls. I like the way you build a simple plot. Again well done and keep them coming!
I liked your next story about pony girls. I like the way you build a simple plot. Again well done and keep them coming!