All Comments on 'The Chess Piece Ch. 07-08'

by CinderLaw

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Another Great Chapter!!!

That was another great Chapter that you wrote in this series. Thank you for mentioning me at the beginning of this chapter. I do like the way you write your stories and I am glad that I am an inspiration for your and help you. I also hate you when you kill off Jason when I thought that he would live through the problems there were there for him. I do have one question is she pregnant with his child this time?

sinerasineraalmost 15 years ago
*Happy Dances*

Another great chapter - Dang hun, but you can WRITE!

*happy dances 'cause she knows what happens*

Looking forward to Chaps 9 & 10 :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Enjoyed the read! Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Of course the enemy would take her to a place that is right next door to her husband’s property. Makes perfect sense, NOT.

One page and a few sentences does not make two chapters.

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