All Comments on 'The Chosen One'

This was a great story. The audio was a little hesitant and displayed little emotion.

Hot, Tail moving, smile across my face. Loved her frisky way. Truely an erotic piece of Art.

I didn't hate it, but there are no inflextions, no seductive nuances, no sighs of relief or excitement added in. There are no add-in sounds at all! Add-in sounds are an important part of an audio story... If you really want to make a story like this one get others "off", you've got to add sounds appropriately. Don't just read the story. Make it sound as though you are recalling it from memory. It's too read! Actually it's just too cold! Warm up! Make my day!! You'll be all right...

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I loved the story. It is one of my favorites. I just wish it wasn't in Real Player format