All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 06'

Awesome, as usual awesome.

As one of your biggest fans i will say it again you got talent brother ;)

I really enjoy your style of writing and your storyline. I am a voracious reader which is responsible for my only negative comment. Too long between chapters and not enough of them. It's true real life interferes with your writing so please take my "negative remarks" as the tongue in cheek comment they are intended to be.

Keep up the good work.

This is the kind of a story that makes one want to live it. You "paint " wonderful "word pictures", but I would love to see the girls and the men as well. On to the next chapter. BTW, enjoyed the cameo. XP

I didn't wet my pants. ;-) I love it when a plan, (finally) comes together! Poor Adam, when he thought the mission was going to be a bust. Way to adapt and overcome the situation and MAKE the mission work! Outstanding, Chief! I hope Nadia gets Pissed when she finds out she was bested!

I would love to see something like that happen in real life!