All Comments on 'The Circle Ch. 24'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 8 years ago
Novel way ...LOL!!!

Enjoyed this immensely...what's next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Circle Ch 24

This Ch. has keep me vary hard and needing to read the next Ch. it was vary good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Time to Quit

Great story for a while, now just a story of a bunch of sluts. Gone is the feelings

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What Happened to The Circle?

I liked the way the plot initially developed but we've lost The Circle. It seems to have morphed into random people fucking because they're horny

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sigh

This started off as a halfway decent story, but without much depth. Now it's drifting like a body in a shallow river, and with about as much life.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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