All Comments on 'The Circle Ch. 26'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I liked this

This story reminds me of similar series of story written by someone named Rimantic1 in this site. I loved his work and I can see I'll like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Romantic1

not Rimantic1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I like this story.

But the lead character in Fifty Shades of Grey is named Christian Grey, not Jonathan Grey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Expounded

"Bob expounded" should be the title of this. Conveying ideas work best when shown and gently explored, not just presented as exposition. Dull dull dull.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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