by SteveWallace
This story reminds me of similar series of story written by someone named Rimantic1 in this site. I loved his work and I can see I'll like this!
But the lead character in Fifty Shades of Grey is named Christian Grey, not Jonathan Grey.
"Bob expounded" should be the title of this. Conveying ideas work best when shown and gently explored, not just presented as exposition. Dull dull dull.