All Comments on 'The Classmate Ch. 01'

Keep it up!

I didn't really see all that much of a difference between the two versions could you point them out? It was still as good as I remember it being the first time I read the first version but I would of rather have gotten a ch.2 then a reworked version of the original

5/5 anyway

Loved it and loved her! Can't wait to hear more about Victoria

This was such a great story, I'm excited for chapter 2 and I would love for Victoria to give it to Eric in the ass.

I hope you keep the (maybe love) part going.Not a dom / sub type thing. Keep writing and i will read :) thanks eric

I'm looking forward to more. I love the way that you described Victoria, and the underlying sweetness to the character. Please keep going, it's good stuff!

Nicely written! Can't wait to read how she returns the favor!!!

Love the story. Like how it is like she hypnotized him. Can't wait to see what she does next to him.

Fantastic seduction. Just enough raunchiness (bathroom blowjob). Willing submission to her desire. Love it. Please write more.

I enjoyed the flow of the story, but constantly calling it "sweet cream" and such got a bit odd, eventually all I could think of was butter or something, lol. Aside from the bad phrase for pre-cum, great job!

I love it, would love to read more.

One of the best short pieces of erotica that I have ever read.

Thank you for taking the time to write it and post it here.

Please, please continue,

Very nice!!!!! U definitely should continue this story. Make it like femdom and romance....just an idea though.....keep up the good work

Keep it going! This is great stuff.

I liked it thanks a lot.

I'm surprised that this guy didn't freak out harder when he found that the girl he liked had a penis. Still a good story, though.

Probably should have read the tags first

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC...i am soooo jealous right now....me want cream tooooooooo

I love this story. You are a very sensual writer

AmAzing pls write more

"FANTASTIC"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! I can "ONLY-IMAGINE", How "SWEET" & "WARM", "HER", "CUMMY-MILK-TASTED" inside "HIS", "MOISY-MOUTH" & "OH-HOW", "SILKY-SMOOTH" it "FELT", "SLOWLY-SLIDING" down "HIS", "HOT-THROAT", to "WARMLY-POOL", "DEEP-INSIDE", "HIS", "WAITING-BELLY"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!!" "Mmmmmm"!!!""Mmmmmm"!!!" "MOST SINCERELY", "DADDY ARTIE"

Love ❤️❤️❤️❤️😛💋😮❤️❤️

Yummy creamy sweet voice, “love my cock fucking your don’t you, you hungry COCKSUCKER!!!” Is what mind wanted to here, along with her pleasure with him helping her out.

@EricSilence/Eric Cisza, from the first word or sentence I fell in love with this wonderful story and its main character Eric and the girl Victoria. You captured and showed the friendship and maybe something more between Victoria and Eric very well.

In particular, their closeness, trust, honesty and openness to each other, and Eric's understanding of Victoria. I would love to be like Eric and have a friend like Victoria.

My heart is beating fast and my thoughts are racing towards the fate of Eric and Victoria. 📖❤️👨🏻‍🎓💕👩🏻💋🍦💦.

ps. Sorry for any mistakes and linguistic inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻‍🦳❤️🧒🏻♀️👧🏻.

📖❤️

@EricSilence/Eric Cisza, od pierwszego słowa, zdania zakochałem się w tej wspaniałej historii i w jej głównym bohaterze Ericu oraz dziewczynie Victorii. Świetnie ująłeś i ukazałeś przyjaźń a może coś więcej pomiędzy Victorią i Ericiem.

A w szczególność ich bliskość, zaufanie, szczerość i otwartość do siebie, oraz zrozumienie dla Victorii przez Erica. Bardzo bym chciał być tak jak Eric i mieć taką koleżankę jaką jest Victoria.

Moje serce bije mocno a myśli wirują ku dalszym losom Erica i Victorii. 📖❤️👨🏻‍🎓💕👩🏻💋🍦💦.

ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.

SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖👩🏻‍🦳❤️🧒🏻♀️👧🏻.

Very sexy and erotic!