All Comments on 'The Cline's Conquer Time Ch. 02'

Love all your stories can't wait for the next chapter

another wonderful story. You are at the top of this catagory keep it going

It's an interesting concept you've started here, allowing you to essentially tell several stories with the same preamble, thus saving time. Great stuff

Looking forward to the next chapters

By "fantastical" I mean you took Audrey's motive too far - it's fine that she wants him to be a fashion model - but a porn model/star? C'mon. It's like you're over-ornamenting the story in the interest of being "sexy" but you poured too much sugar in the mixture and the taste is off. My note would be to keep it contained and lose the porn thing - it's hokey. A studly high-fashion model can pound all the pussy he wants and doesn't need to be in "porn". Second, those worlds don't mix - any so-called power player in the fashion industry would deem porn trashy and low-class.

Just my two cents. Love your work. And please continue "Hurricane Gina" at some point!

In total agreement with TheTitLover. This is perfect for doing many couplings.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder which Cline he's going to get fucked by first.

I read 3 before 2 and this one wasso much better. To the point and gripping

I keep looking at the last modified date. Dummy me.

Great story as always. With a bit of a "twist" ?.. I didn't expect the pornstar direction

About the number of kids.. 4 plus the twins she already had or 2 new and twins ?

Keep on the good work.