by KayVamp
please write another chapter soon!!! :)
And I know this chapter was longer then the previous ones but a little bit longer? lol
i have been waiting so long for another chapter and finally it's here!!! i loved how the story went by why did you change the writing style from third person to first person? ... it made the middle section of the chapter read more like a diary entry .....
I have been waiting for this chapter for a while, and it was worth it.
Thanks again for another awesome chapter
your work is so wonderful. i feel as if i know the characters and feel there joy and pain. I an like so head over heels in love with jonathan and ryan and bella and marie. please please please write more of the company
i want to find out what happens next.... please! im falling in love w/ the story!
Another outstanding story! I really hate having to wait for more, so hurry it up!
Please!
You have really good stories,just none have endings.Is it possible to finish one story before starting another one??
Great story please write the next chapter. Don't leave us hanging too long.
...this story isn't even about the sex. It's a tasteful, beautifully written piece of art, and I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. Please write more soon, I'm dying to know how Marie and Bella come into their powers and just what type they have. Not to mention that they're half vampire and half *what*?
nephilim is a type of angle not a type of vamp and one who knows the sups would know this