All Comments on 'The Consequences Of Gambling'

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snoopersnooperalmost 20 years ago
Criticism

I liked the story, but it was difficult to see who was which at times. If it is a continuation of a previous story, say so. If not, introduce the characters better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
OK but

I realize this is supposed to be a fantasy, but his acceptance of the concept is a little to easy. It's almost on the level of him coming home and her telling him, "Oh, we're having chicken tonight." If they're into swinging, state so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Well, it is different.

However, it is not logical. I don't know how to rate it. It is too stupid for it to be erotic but, somehow it was.

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 8 years ago
Switcharoo

Their games lead to the husbands having to trade marriages when they each knock up the other's wife.

Crapola,pure and simple!

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Too cutesy poo

Especially at the end

amyyumamyyumalmost 5 years ago
Sick, sick, sick...

So why did I enjoy it? 5*

kirei8kirei8over 2 years ago

Why not trade sluts... permenently?

Sumnut96Sumnut969 months ago

I now understand, sadly, why the rating is below 4.

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