by jdistel
I liked the story, but it was difficult to see who was which at times. If it is a continuation of a previous story, say so. If not, introduce the characters better.
I realize this is supposed to be a fantasy, but his acceptance of the concept is a little to easy. It's almost on the level of him coming home and her telling him, "Oh, we're having chicken tonight." If they're into swinging, state so.
However, it is not logical. I don't know how to rate it. It is too stupid for it to be erotic but, somehow it was.
Their games lead to the husbands having to trade marriages when they each knock up the other's wife.
Crapola,pure and simple!