All Comments on 'The Contract Ch. 03'

You really are one for a cliff-hanger aren't you? Sadist.

It will be quite something if Mr Power is to be mated with an ex-human. The mortification of it. He sounds slightly effeminate. This can only prove to be good - her being a little rough around the edges (opposites and stuff). I could also be wrong.

Thanks for intricate story! Can't wait for next chapter.

Get and editor, ASAP! Good LORD, this story is one long run-on sentence! Do you have something against commas? I'm not being a grammar nazi. Your grammatical and punctuation errors take away from the story. It disrupts the flow of a story when the reader has to stop and decipher what they're reading because what they've read makes little to no sense! Make this good story great by getting an editor!

Just love it. Quite complex and very interesting. Please share more.