All Comments on 'The Conversion of Carrie Ch. 02'

I'm glad you cut down on the dimensions in this one, but I still think you should leave something to the imagination of the individual reader on that. Good job overall, however, and a nice follow-up to your first effort.

Once I started to read it, I couldn't stop. The thought of Carrie in the black dress, touching herself, really nice, slowly taking it off for Norman, treating Norman to the best Birthday ever. Carrie is a special girl. Thank you for the chapter.

nice... read both ch. hot hot hot... im all wet!... more please.