All Comments on 'The Cool Alpine Breeze'

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impo_61impo_61about 8 years ago
A good night of romantic love in the life of a married couple...

A good night of romantic love in the life of a married couple...Well written...3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Best story of the day

It was a really bad day. At.least this wasn't insane or disgusting. I'll give it a three.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good to see a married couple having fun

Nicely played.

JamesRTickitJamesRTickitabout 8 years ago
Very enjoyable

A story grounded in reality, very unusual round here.

Well written, a good read.

swingerjoeswingerjoeabout 8 years ago
Welcome to Lit

This is a nice scene, and very well written. It isn't much of a story, per se, as there is no plot or character development or conflict/resolution or any of the other elements expected to be found in a complete story, but it's enjoyable nonetheless.

Thanks for contributing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice!

Nice to read about a real living wife still getting it on with her husband of 25 years.

May they have many more of those years!

gordo12gordo12about 8 years ago
Another Fuckwit that can't read category descriptions

Romantic, erotic but this is NOT LW material

Automatic 1*

Gwanji16Gwanji16about 8 years ago
Brings back memories

A very good story that reminded me of my honeymoon when we did fuck outside in the shadow of tha Alps!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
that's right gordo

unless you got a hotwife being fucked by a huge dick and the husband cheering her on, it's not LW. after the bull drops his load the hubby munching at her fur burger cleaning up the mess. now that's LW isn't that right gordo?

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 8 years ago
Scene

A nice erotic scene between two people that we know nothing about other than they have been together 25 years, have children, and are European. No real story, no drama, no conflict, no middle and no end to the story. Nice beginning though.

foolscapfoolscapabout 8 years ago
Put a sock in it, Gordy.

and go back down to the kids table and quit boring the adults.

gordo12gordo12about 8 years ago
Says the fool in his cap!

Or maybe the sock is on his head. Hard to tell.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Nice little interlude, but not really a story.

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