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Click hereWhich was pretty cool of her, don't you think?
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Anonymousabout 1 hour agoSince you asked, very cool of DD, to be honest...
Really good, but so much left to cover....
How well Davita and Rick develop as a couple, with more eroticism on that, their struggles wi9th melding as a couple, with tidal influences from Gloria, Brad, parents, restarting DD's career, etc? Lots of growth and change there...
Why didn't Rick expose how Brad cheats?
What sort of things had Gloria gotten away with when she previously manipulated Rick? So, has she cheated before? What sort of things are big enough and important enough for her to remember those events?
What is actually wrong with Gloria? Does she gain any insight, or growth? Does she manage to tempt Rick at all ever again? Does she gain any peace in regaining abstinence?
What happens when she finds she not only drove her husband away, but lost him to the head cheerleader/ Prom Queen? ... who was, at that point, totally over godlike Brad?
How about if she finds out Brad did not care about her, and fucked her when she was out of it and could not enjoy it?
What about when she finds out, not only did Brad basically rape her, but then whored his own wife out on a bet, with Rick? ... and the nature of what Rick won? ... and how Brad treats women? All women, even her, now, when she is beautiful? Not only was she only going to be nothing more than one of several side-pieces for Brad, but he raped her? The man she wanted children with did this to her?
Really good story, just left me wanting more, and that is not necessarily a bad thing
Five for you
Anonymous3 months agoMan, that story was almost perfect. The few grammatical and spelling errors could be overlooked, but the ending was terrible. Too abrupt. Too many loose ends. For how it was drawn out, you should have covered the divorce and concluded with him and Dee Dee.
26thNC3 months agoThat final confrontation was really good. He had the evidence to destroy her and he set her lying ass up perfectly.
Anonymous4 months agoHell hath no fury as true love betrayed?
Schadenfreude.
(Paradise is no sweeter than a grateful admirer built for porn?)
Freudenfreude
