by jongore
Not badly written at all, just my personal taste I'm so tired of stories where the female character must be humiliated and destroyed. He's going to rape her and make her like it in front of her whole kingdom, effectively stripping her of power and her subjects will never look at her the same. I realize that's a fetish for some, so more power to you, but personally I would love to see a story where the woman isn't immediately reduced to weakness.
The story is in the “Nonconsent/Reluctance” category. What did you expect?
I don't think non consent/reluctance has to mean humiliation and loss of power. I love the struggle of a woman who is strong and capable but finds she enjoys being dominated sexually. Reconciling those two sides of herself, learning to submit to someone while maintaining her life. That to me is an interesting and sexy story. Again I realize the loss of power thing is what some people find sexy, but I think it's also kind of lazy and cliche. That's my OPINION.