All Comments on 'The Corpse Bride'

by DrSpidey

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Vowels are NOT Vows

In the context of a wedding ceremony, vows are promises between the two participants.

Vowels, in English, are letters of the alphabet that represent a sound and are a,e,i,o,u

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sweet love story

I liked it. It was a little creepy at first (which was intended I'm sure), but ended up being very sweet. I liked the ending.

DrSpideyDrSpideyalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Sorry.

I made a few mistakes and I was going to try and add a few things in and fix a few things. But Literotica was pending it sooner than I expected and it got submitted.

So I went to sleep that night and never got to edit it anymore. The next day it was pending. I apologize for the mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nice

You get a thumbs up. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Bravo

I really liked this story, it ended up being creepy, erotic and quite romantic at the same time

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[23.12.22]

Mucho Kawa!

11/10!!!!!

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