All Comments on 'The Corruption of Carol'

Please more of her adventures

And got worse...

Behold, the cockaroaches scitter out theyre holes!!! Every days a new idiotic comment bout a wive which be a whore or be cheats or both!!! Thats the cooments the commentator need no brain!!! Maybe its a cry for mental help!!! Or diaper change!?!!!

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I stopped reading right there. She is getting a boob job while her husband is away? Anything else you want us to swallow before you are done? Maybe she wants to get pregnant with the other man's baby before he gets home, you know, just for laughs. Come on, let's TRY to keep it on this side of believable. Make her a slut, yes. Make him a cuck, okay. But don't go completely off the deep end. So 2*.

The author wants us all to swallow what Carol did... I hope not many of will.... sorry story, characters and marriage, which will not last

Isn't it amazing how little can be crammed into so much space? How do you do that?

Good plot, good acceleration. I wish a little more dirty talking, but it is fine as it is. Hoping for another part.

Boy these "anonymous" critics really get around, don't they. So lame....

You "anonymous" haters are like dandruff... merely something to be brushed off and forgotten. Stop reading since you don't like these stories. Then just go away and don't come back....

I liked the author's counter comment about how they hate it and keep reading. Must be that they're repressed and feel guilty after they 'indulge'. My rule of thumb is that any loving wife story is scored at least one full 'star' below where it belongs.

Keep it up.

Your writing is weak, nothing but cliché garbage and sissy boy wimps with cum dumpster slut wives, yawn....... Stop worrying about anonymous posts and more about better writing skills.... This was garbage 1*****

Love wives who lose control and suck cock and get fucked then get their husband to lick their cum filled pussy

You got it right, almost. It was even worse than you say.